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The Thesis
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College best-friends, Sarah and April, head to the beach for their spring-break. They take along Sarah's pet dog, Duke, who gets rather frisky with all the excitement on the beach, among which is a snake on a prowl for a wholesome meal...
This was a commissioned story for Inanimate77. My commission queue remains open, but involves a lengthy wait (although it’d be shorter for monster/F stories, for which I have only a for requests). If any readers think they might be interested then please get in touch via PM/comments or on Discord (BunnyWrites).
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I think you messed up and posted this twice.
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
Thanks for letting me know so quick! I'm not sure how that happened, but the other one should be deleted now.
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
This is the one without the tags. :(
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
Gah, you're right. Fixed, thanks again!
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
If there's any missing let me know.
Posted by kirche 1 year ago Report
I love the drawn out digestion! Having her talking on the second day to add a small ray of hope was a nice touch.
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
Yeah I loved writing the humiliation Sarah can pile on during the second day, really hammers home April's situation.
Posted by MinusFive 1 year ago Report
This was fantastic! I loved the whole digestion process and eventual disposal of her!! <3
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
Thank you <3 It was fun to do the full arc of that, as normally stories stop after the initial vore scene.
Posted by MinusFive 1 year ago Report
Yeessss! I love the full tour aspect of vore. It just adds that final bit of.. finality to it all. It's the natural result of food after all, and having a living hopeful girl reduced to nothing but manure is so dominating.
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
That was the intention, to showcase the descent from "promising young woman with a future" to manure, so I'm glad it came across well.
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
Great to see you adding snake-vore to your list. Well done, as always (although I'm not a fan of the bestiality, so I just skipped over that).
In regards to Sarah, you do give us some backstory on her curiosity on digestion and biology as a whole, but is there any more to why she would allow her friend to die? We can see some slight annoyance in the relationship and dialogue, but is there more back story that I overlooked?
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
Hopefully there should be more snake vore to come, they're great preds~
As for Sarah's motivation, it's a mix of curiosity but also her finding it extremely arousing, and using the excuse of her friend having been a bitch to justify not helping. I'd considered delving a little more on Sarah's thoughts, but I didn't want to pull the attention away from the snake vore happening at the same time. It was perhaps something I could have explained more post-vore though.
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
Makes sense. I was wondering if perhaps a bit jealousy of the other's privelege and good looks factored in, plus the fact that April understated the threat at first that the snake could vore her.
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
Oh yeah I wouldn't say it was any one thing, it was a combination of factors (including jealousy) that led to her delayed reaction, and encouraged her to indulge the more carnal side of her feelings.
Posted by ragnar 1 year ago Report
I really enjoyed the teasing and humiliation inflicted on that poor piece of snake chow.
A lovely read as always. Good girl.
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
Mhmm, thank you <3 Always a pleasure to bring you a little pleasure~