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After the false hope of being rescued and returned to normal by Amber appears to fall through, Damon falls back into Lexi’s clutches.
I’ve been curious if you guys have any sort of preference about whether or not I upload these stories as a PDF or as a .Docx that’s viewable here on site?
Does it matter?
Anyway, I hope you guys have enjoyed the read!
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Posted by muslone 1 year ago Report
Great chapter to the "A Tough Pill To Swallow". This chapter was captivating and kept the reader on the edge of their seat. Loved the dialog and playful attitude of Vanessa as well as how she came across as a possible savior. If only he would have tried not to get on her bad side she may have kept him around like she was her ex-boyfriend. Looking forward to the next chapter and where Vanessa's ex boyfriend's role will be.
Posted by Gapemaw 1 year ago Report
Thank you so much for the feedback! :D
Its always great hearing about what kind of thoughts and ideas the audience may have after reading
Posted by Tsavo 1 year ago Report
Vanessa taunting Damon by swallowing another shrinky before him? Devilishly wonderful. Love the cruel pred size play you bring to the table with these. Going into my favorite series list. <3
Posted by Gapemaw 1 year ago Report
<3!
Posted by Karbo 1 year ago Report
The story is pretty cruel but the fact Lexi was ultimately the one who got to swallow and digest Damon at the end and to be all smug about it was really hot X3 And the whole scene of Amanda being fed to Amber who gulped her down during her sleep was pretty incredible. A great serie of stories :D
Posted by Gapemaw 1 year ago Report
AHH! Haha thank you so much! You've no idea how much your feedback just made me squeel lol.
I definitely have plenty more planned for Lexi and the bunch though beyond the end of Damon so stay tuned! ^.^
Posted by shaman 7 months ago Report
I so much hope for a follow up chapter, this is such a good story ^^
Posted by Gapemaw 6 months ago Report
I have a ton more drafted, I just need to actually get around to getting things into a publishable state
Posted by shaman 2 months ago Report
Good luck with that! When I wrote a lot, I'd always have tons ready in the draft. The actually finalizing would take ages.