Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report

I love Mel's attitude in this. From her refusal to be treated like a toy to her declaring Maisie not having permission to eat her to her excitement with Fawn, it's all excellent.

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thank you very much! She may be tiny, but she's strong-willed and stands up for herself. ;) Or at least she did - now she's quite happily nourishment in Fawn's body!

Posted by Bellyache 1 year ago Report

I loved this! Fawn is better than Lorna so Mel dodged a bullet there.

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Fawn was certainly worth Mêl waiting for. And she's finally got what she wanted - she's been swallowed and eaten up. :)

Posted by Sleepless 1 year ago Report

Awesome! I was starting to get impatient and annoyed with Lorna then her douchebag friends came along and made Mel uncomfortable. I was glad that she went back and Fawn got her instead.

There's a part 3! I assume he'll be back with Patricia and Carissa?

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks! :D I agree: Going back to the café turned out better for Mêl in the end, and she's certainly very happy to have been swallowed by Fawn. :)

Yes; we won't be seeing Mêl again, but there's more to come with Pat and Carissa!

Posted by lazylayjay 1 year ago Report

Really enjoyed this. It's much sexier when the pred and prey have some sort of connection.

Is this foreshadowing something dramatic with Patricia and Carissa I wonder?

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks; I'm glad you're enjoying it. And Mêl and Fawn will be even closer once Fawn has digested her. ;)

Carissa and Pat seem to be... experiencing temptation. We'll see where it leads them! ;)