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Tags: Casual digestion Casual vore digested alive Digestion Disposal Disposal Scat disregard for human life disregard for life Disregard of Life F/F Fatal fatal digestion Female Pred Female Prey Human Pred Human Prey masturbating masturbating prey Masturbating while Digesting Masturbation Masturbation in Belly milf prey mom prey Mom Vore painful death Painful Digestion Prey POV Semi-willing Stranger Stranger Pred Stranger vore Uncaring Observers Willing Willing prey
I seem to really like comas...
Just another meal for another pred, this time someone's mom at a pool.
Characters:
Sandra (you) - Curvy milf, long red hair, orange bikini
Adam - Middle age man, your husband
Sammy - Young red headed boy, rowdy, your son
The lady (pred) - Slender, long black hair, pale skin, black bikini, professional woman digester
Posted by Grimlock030 1 year ago Report
Nice
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Posted by msc13 1 year ago Report
This was great! Nice and straightforward, you’re really good at this.
One suggestion, I thought the italicized voices were a little odd, mainly because that is almost always used for internal dialogue.
Looking forward to your next!
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Posted by MediumGarlic7000 1 year ago Report
Yea I see where you're coming from
I usually only used italics when i'm doing internal thoughts, i just did it this time in an attempt to make the dialogue easier to notice at a glance.
I'll probably try to do something else to make it stand out for the next one.
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Posted by msc13 1 year ago Report
I wouldn’t overthink it. I think appropriate paragraph breaks is the most straightforward way.
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