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An egotistical academic named William Van Helsteg is hellbent on leading the charge on humanities pursuit for knowledge. Notorious for pushing rather ...unethical experiments, his latest study finds himself and his peers trying to find new ways to deal with death row inmates. Only rather than being regular inmates, those inmates are a part of a tiny race which averages around four-inches tall. Not only that, but somehow he managed to get his eighteen-year-old daughter involved.
So I originally planned to have Vore University 5 or a separate big project I'm working on posted on Vore Day. Life unfortunately got in the way and I was unable to do so. Alas, I didn't want to not post anything on vore day so I spent this beautiful day writing a story I came up with on the spot. It's 6500 words about I believe and it is completely depraved, yet I regret nothing. I really hope it was worth the grind but I'm sure at least a few of you out there will enjoy it. My goal was to try write something relatively unique with a hint of depravity, yet I still wanted some good-ol' fashion macro/micro vore. If there are any horrendous grammar/spelling mistakes, please let me know. This didn't go through an editor. (All characters are adults)
I value contributing to this community that has given so much to me so I had to grind this out. I hope you enjoy the story I speed wrote in one go and please do not hesitate to provide feedback. I like seeing what other people like >:)
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Posted by AlbertKwon9182 8 months ago Report
Happy Vore day, legend! Great to see your giantess story again.
Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report
Thanks! I hope to post more soon!
Posted by MisterNut 8 months ago Report
Always good to see more, slightly disappointed on how short the swallowing/buildup was compared to your more recent posts, but for a story made in a day it was really good.
Will we ever get a Haylee ending for Youthful Curiousity?
Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report
Thanks, yeah it was a bit rushed but I thought I'd try a shorter less planned story to switch it up a bit. I had the impression that people generally enjoyed narratives that got straight to the point. Seems I should stick to my normal formula going forward.
As for the Youthful Curiousity question, I can't promise its on my priority list but I have considered a fun idea where I compile alternative ending for different stories I've done in the past all in one post. It really depends if I manage to get more important stories out first like VU5 or a continuation of my Miniverse stories.
Thanks again!
Posted by MisterNut 8 months ago Report
Like I said, for a rushed story its really good. For a short story like this, straight to the point is okay and might be better, but for longer stories like youthful/vore university? I cant speak for everyone, but I do think a bigger majority loves the drawn out swallowing/mouth play and the journey down.
I think EVERYONE would LOVE that idea aswell. I feel like having a bunch of endings in a single post here might be hard to do though.. just the amount of scrolling to see each. Maybe a link to edited endings of each?
Do you have a guesstimation on when your next storyline or "important story" will be out?
Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report
Fair enough, I myself also do prefer longer drawn out stories with more teasing/mouth play/swallowing etc. so I do agree.
If possible, I would definitely want to do a link to each ending/alternative scenario. My current idea was to do 3 different alt endings and creating a blog post for people to provide input on what they'd like to see.
I mean, it really depends but If I had to guess, probably 2 weeks... or sometime before the end of August?
Posted by MisterNut 6 months ago Report
???? you, TinyHunter and DocClamor are like my big three on this site, and all 3 of you havent dropped a story in over a month... we need to get cloning made already so you can write more ???? ????
(Another guesstimation on next release?)
Posted by MisterNut 6 months ago Report
Idk why it added so many question marks i didnt put those at all
Posted by iliketoread 6 months ago Report
Life is cruel and keeps us all busy I suppose... If I could write these stories as a full time job, I would! Fingers-crossed I can get a story out soon.
Posted by Wolfsage 8 months ago Report
Uhh, nice to finally get a new story.
Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report
:D It is
Posted by AnAccount 8 months ago Report
Very enjoyable story. I do want to add though that the high cost of administering the death penalty has nothing to do with what is being injected but rather the lengthy trials, appeals, and evaluations involved in determining whether someone can be put to death by the state. The deciding, not the executing, is what makes the death penalty prohibitively expensive.
Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report
I am aware, I just had to give a stupid simple reason to help provide some rational to the insanity I wrote above. Within the 6 hours I gave myself to write it, that is the best I could come up with. Not the best solution I know. But thank you for writing the more accurate reason, hope others who are unaware do not take it at face value. I hope and feel my writing comes off in a way that people don't take it too seriously.
Thanks also for reading the story, I hope you still enjoyed it regardless of the silly reasonings the professor provides.
Posted by AnAccount 7 months ago Report
I enjoy all the things you write regardless of what the various professors profess in them :)
Posted by EmpressKora 8 months ago Report
I really like the concept it’s good we were able to get a vore day story from you. I love how you executed and wrote this. I struggle to get my story points across throughout shorter writing. But I think you do a great job of it! I liked the pred and I always do like the idea of someone egging them on in someway to be a pred, I think it being the father with his daughter was nice and I don’t see it often. Not used to seeing disposal from you either but I thought it was nicely done. I’m sure the story served the purpose you intended. Well done, you continue to be one of the few writers I look to when I’m stumped on how to execute something.
Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report
Appreciate you taking the time to both read the story and write your thoughts. I'm glad there was enjoyment to be had for a story I rushed to get out the door. I do think that this story would have been better as a longer, more thought out story, but I'm happy you think I did a good job.
I love preds being egged on as well. I honestly am a fan whenever 'vore' can happen in some 'interesting' way regarding the pred.
Yeah the father daughter thing was just a deranged way of me adding some 'inappropriate' tension between the two main non-tiny characters. The story totally didn't need it but I'm sure it adds spice for some readers out there.
I normally don't do disposal in stories because I don't consider myself very good at writing them (and it feels like I force them into my stories), but its good to hear you liked it. I'm always open for more feedback on my disposal scenes if you have any other comments about it.
Thanks again for the kind comment and I'll be looking forward patiently for when a new story drops on your page :)
Posted by blab123 7 months ago Report
Short and sweet; another solid story, quite impressive for being written from scratch in a single day.
Not that death row inmates don't deserve a bit of pain, especially rapists and murderers, but Van Helsteg's pride intentionally manipulating data so that his new execution method appears more ethical than he claims is disgruntling. Can't wait for the multiple sequels I'm positive you have in the works as Professor Remy and a team of skeptics work hard through thrilling escapades risking their to uncover this deception ;).
Posted by iliketoread 7 months ago Report
Yeah I'm definitely happy with how it turned out for being something I challenged myself to write so quick.
Can't promise we'll see more of Van Helsteg's deranged experiments in the future but I can imagine some interesting sequels. Can't let myself distracted with future potential with this one when I have an unfinished Vore University 5 to get out. I owe Emma and Jack some spotlight.
Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment!
Posted by hatter 7 months ago Report
A fun story! The concept was a bit silly but that can be hard to avoid with this fetish. You can tell it was written quickly and a few parts felt like they were there out of obligation (like the disposal) but I enjoyed it.
Making the daughter a bit bitchy and self-centered was a great choice and improved it a lot.
I think there should've been a pillcam instead of an endoscope though because trying to eat with that thing in sounds incredibly uncomfortable lol
Posted by iliketoread 7 months ago Report
I let myself get a little silly for my shorter stories. Sort of like you said, feel like sometimes you needa sacrifice believability to make some of these stories work. I do definitely 'try' to stay more grounded on the longer more thought out stories.
The disposal was definitely put there out of obligation lol.
Pillcam does make a lot more sense huh... guess thats what happens when I write too fast. Oh well...
Thanks for the comment! Looking forward to any future writing you may have planned!
Posted by TheMechanicalGLRK 4 months ago Report
I liked this story, thank you for continuing to write and share with us!
I love seeing the situations people cook up and the justifications they give their characters for the terrible shit they do. The professor’s refusal to be proven wrong was a great and believable touch. I also liked that it’s not largely already accepted in society, ( tolerated but controversial is a sweet spot for the dynamic, I personally enjoy most) it helps drive home the inhuman horror, the powerless frustration from being at the mercy of systems far bigger and stronger than you that feels very real.
I think you gave it the right amount of thought for what this story is, others have already pointed out things that stood out to me as in some way odd, but they didn’t pull me out of the story I just noted it and felt amused.
Thanks again!
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed the dynamics of this story. I too am a fan of dynamics which are tolerated but still controversial lol. And it's nice to hear that the time I spent on it was worth it.
Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment! Appreciate it!