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With her protege secure, Lady Isa attends to her duties in the dungeon, but will she manage to remain cold and professional? More importantly, should she?
TRIGGER WARNING: wrongful imprisonment, captor/captive.
Hello all! This is the fourth chapter of A Protege's Return. We are taking a break from Irahel's PoV to introduce a new character, meaning this story can be mostly understood even without previous context. The series takes place in the original setting World of Alivia, created by me and Neoneo
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Posted by Avora 7 months ago Report
Panties of holding XD
I could use those sometime.
Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report
The idea came from an old campaign where it was suggested that the largest-chested character could get a bra of holding - both for modesty, but also for horny. It would've meant smaller breasts, but also the ability to suggestively pull all sorts of stuff out of her cleavage like it's a hammerspace (including, potentially, cleavage "vore"?)
The idea got dropped in favour of an alternative, but Neoneo remembered it years later and it was finally concretized with Isa's panties of holding.
Posted by MasterGryph 7 months ago Report
I'm detecting a pattern in the behavior of the Kingdom of Varhalia.
Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report
Which pattern is that?
Posted by MasterGryph 7 months ago Report
Conspicuously leaving a border town out to dry, then indications that someone higher up knows more about Raya's connections than she consciously does.
Now, these issues could be coming from opposite directions, but with it being less than three days since the previous chapter, it seems more likely it's the same motive behind both. And the motive that fits both, is that someone is trying to subtly start a conflict between Varhalia and it's neighbors, while making sure the latter can be blamed for it.
Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report
Oh, so you're theorizing that Deermire was left unguarded to tempt the neighbouring realms into seizing it, thus starting war, and that the Raya incident was likewise intended to spark an armed conflict? That's an interesting guess. Of course, both of them could be explained with Hanlon's Razor (Varhalia being in decline and the populace being paranoid), but what's the fun in having a fantasy story without a little bit of intrigue?
I'll add that the Finalfin fief isn't on the border, nor Linmo (the village where Raya was captured and publicly tried at), though Linmo is fortified and they aren't too far away from the Matriarchy border either (the Matriarchy border runs along most of Varhalia's northwest, while other borders are thinner). The Ausmatis chapter of the knights is one of the closest to said border.
Posted by MasterGryph 7 months ago Report
Yes, that's what I was getting at. And the way we specifically hear about Raya's homeland being informed of her railroading and "execution" too late to do anything about it... The judges could have just claimed she was an unaffiliated bandit and not sent word at all. So it feels like they wanted to provoke a reaction there.
On the flipside, when I said the problems could be coming from opposite directions, I meant that the harsh treatment of Raya could be a result of the reforms hinted at last chapter, leading to higher suspicion of everyone. But again, the timing makes that unlikely.
Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report
It's possible that they didn't even notify the regent but he got it through word of mouth.
And yea, Raya's arrest took place at least a few days ago whereas this chapter is on the same day as the council.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 months ago Report
Holy cow, this story had tension, a happy ending, some fear play and hot sex.
I would love to see more merciful preds in the future handling scared prey.
Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report
Thank you! I'm flattered by your comment. It seems like this chapter achieved everything we were going for and more.
And I definitively am fond of preds sparing preys and I want to make more stories with that dynamic.
Posted by TootCore 7 months ago Report
Aside from the weird insistence on calling Isa's junk a "futa", this story scratches the itch of nonfatal cock vore just fine. There ain't enough of it, and this one is neat !
Posted by IddlerItaler 7 months ago Report
Futanaris are simply something that exists in this setting. Though I agree with the sentiment that we could use more non-fatal cockvore (or non-fatal in general), and I've been trying to provide with my writing in some way, so I'm glad to know I helped you with that.