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I would literally die if my dog ate me <3<3<3<3<3
So i'm not entirely happy with all aspects of this one (Especially thee beginning), but i have ran out of ideas of how to change it.
You: Tall muscle mommy, though going the gym and eating a couple preys would make her immune to the fate of all other pieces of meat
Bobby: your son, close bond with his dog Rocket, really wants to go the arcade with his friends
Rocket: A good boy
Posted by sheppard74 7 months ago Report
Agree with you. Rocket is a good boy.
Overall a good story, build up was nice and the Mom trying at first to weasel out was good. Bobby using his friend Sam for his argument was a moment that made me chuckle.
And the end with Bobby "betraying" his mom was also a nice turn of events.
So good story.
PS: maybe a small story about what happened with Sam?
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Posted by RedEye241 7 months ago Report
hmmm a very good stroy i do like the semi willing/ unwilling part
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Posted by TheHumanPred 7 months ago Report
great story!
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Posted by qwerteceees 7 months ago Report
if your out of ideas i have a ton i can give you if you want I'd do them myself but i dont like writing
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Posted by MediumGarlic7000 7 months ago Report
Well i've still got some ideas of my own, but suggestions that fit my style are always appreciated!
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Posted by qwerteceees 7 months ago Report
my main three ideas are a willing story set during a marathon where they feed themselves to a other runners lab. a willing story where they feed themselves to a pregnant husky at a breeder. and a semi willing story where they after convincing feed themselves to a poodle at the dog park cause there's not much poodle pred anything
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Posted by Facelessmon 7 months ago Report
Man, what I'd do to meet the same fate <3
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Posted by Mapachees 7 months ago Report
Pronto habrá siguiente historia?
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Posted by MediumGarlic7000 7 months ago Report
No será nada parecido a una secuela, pero estoy tratando de terminar una ahora mismo. (Lo traduje en Google, así que disculpen la gramática).
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Posted by Bradleymiddler 7 months ago Report
I liked it overall
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Posted by VoraciousPrincess 4 months ago Report
Rocket is the best boy.
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