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Hullo everyone! It took me a while... well, until I got to the vore, then finishing it took me like three days. But here's the story that won my recent WIP poll, to decide which of several WIPs I should prioritize and finish!
Anyways, here's the story of Taeki, a demi-squirrel that meets her friend at the mall. They decide to grab some food before they shop, and she decides to grab something... well, someone... a little bigger than she probably should...
A cute little project I've had in mind for ages that I finally did! Also, the first time in a while that the main character was actually, like, plain straight.
Also the math Taeki does in guessing the size of her meal is of course, wrong. Did the math myself out of curiousity and her prey probably sits at a minimum of 4x her weight and probably closer to five or six times it.
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Posted by IddlerItaler 5 months ago Report
Nice story!
Using tasers to even the odds in a vore setting makes sense. In general, some readers complain like: "why would 4 ft people live in the same society as 8 ft people? The big guys could stomp them any moment" and a possible comeback is "the short people have knives", and tasers would work even more effectively. I've seen tasers also being used as "win buttons" to take out stronger preds and turn them into preys. Talk about equalizers.
Alternatively, I guess a survival strategy for small preds would be to eat enough until they are no longer small preds, if size gain mode: ON is enabled.
"the petite sciurid predator" This made me chuckle. That's a way to call a squirrel girl, I suppose. And the security guard assisting her was cute and comical.
Posted by PaperWriter 5 months ago Report
Glad we're of similar minds on the tasers. ^^ I haven't seen them used in too many stories personally, but they seemed like a very reasonable possession for a small girl in a world of people that might like to swallow her... and, I mean, who's to say that taser didn't play a part in some of her previous meals :P
I mean, Taeki can attest that waistsize-gain mode is on, but not height gain... sadly for her.
After I went out of my way and called the deertaur a cervid I had to do something similar with Taeki, though I had to go back and look up what the family name for squirrels is. Glad it made for an enjoyable line ^^
As for the security guard, he was a fun moment on my end as well... I was just in the middle of writing the story (and reading a comic on the side) and had a sudden moment of, "Wait, when was the last time I wrote a character that was just... straight?" So voila, he became not only helpful but sexy, and allowed for a fun open ending :)
Posted by IddlerItaler 5 months ago Report
Ironically I completely overlooked the usage of "cervid". That word didn't stick out to me as fancy or verbose because in my language deer is already "cervo", so yeah.
Also I feel you about straight characters feeling rare. I tend to lean into the "everyone is bi" trope.
Posted by PaperWriter 5 months ago Report
It's neat with romance languages how some words line up like that :)
I hadn't really stopped to think (recently at least) about the number of my stories with sexual content that feature characters that are either bi or plain lesbians... though I guess a lot of my stories don't have any guys in them at all, which probably has a fair bit of influence on that. Also the fact that I'm not very good at writing m/f sex scenes, which is part of the reason that the story ended before said scene happened :/
Posted by FreedomPug 5 months ago Report
God I just love smaller preds, even moreso with slow digestion. All is right with the world.
Posted by PaperWriter 5 months ago Report
Smol preds are the best preds~