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Jessie has recently turned 18 and is getting ready to go to college when she gets a surprise about her future from an unexpected source: her pretend friend from when she was a child.
This is my first venture into First Person perspective and took a lot of editing work to make it work. Let me know what ya think?
A follow up chapter is planned as well as a prequel as to Inamara's tragic origins.
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Posted by The Swarm 13 years ago Report
One word: brilliant
i loved the relationship between the two, the casual coaxing from Inamara.
ALl in all, the best thing i've seen or read on here in a while.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
o///o Thank you.
Posted by Tafillia 13 years ago Report
Very amazing :3 one of the best i've read ever
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
0////0 Thank you.
Posted by Ilksurthysys 13 years ago Report
Wow. This is good. Really good. I can't wait to read the next part.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Thank you o////o;;
Hopefully I'll get the next part out before next year. lol. But I really love Inamara as a character so lets see, hmmmm?
Posted by Ilksurthysys 13 years ago Report
That'll be something to look forward to then. Happy writing Im'Rhys.
Posted by SirScotty 13 years ago Report
Impressive.
*re-reads*
Most impressive. Very good story, do want more.
Posted by SirScotty 13 years ago Report
It actually reminds me a lot of TW's Neko/Vore Campus setting, except with a bit more immediate reforming. Which is a very good thing.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Outfoxed was the original inspiration for Inamara. I just have other interests in the fetish world than Throatwolf does, or at least with my kitsune character.
Posted by Blackheart55 13 years ago Report
Very nice. Keep up the good work Imrhys.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Thank you o////o
Posted by Ashley_Urikoshima 13 years ago Report
This was a truly wonderful story to read.
Seeing the sort of connection between a child coming of age to befriend an old companion like a cuddly toy that was so precious to them is just something to melt one's heart. I thought it was lovely <3
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Thank you, particularly coming from you o///o
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Creepy, yet erotic story. I enjoyed it, thanks for writing this man.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
What made it creepy for you? I don't think I have to ask about the erotic part :D
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
A powerful creature watching a girl silently ever since she was an infant, pretending to be her best friend yet only intending to eat her to gain power and sexual pleasure. It looks like Inamara ended up finding she had great affection for Jessie, and decided to preserve her spirit somehow (what exactly happened at the end?), though, so the ending was reassuring.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Mmmmm, I like how you put it. And yes, that ending needs some editing work elsewhere to explain it better. Well and there is technically a part two to this story to help explain a few other things.
What happened at the end is what always happens in RP's with Inamara, but I assumed too many things so a couple things were lost in translation. So it is back to editing (I will not explain why/how outside of a story or editing has no meaning). When I have finished with editing I may just PM you to ask your opinion then >_>
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Sure, happy to help
Posted by Throat_Wolf 13 years ago Report
If Kazuki's and my stories inspired this, then we're certainly doing something right.
Very nicely done. I loved every bit of it. The pacing was perfect, drawing out the anticipation exactly the right length. I think this is my favorite story of yours yet.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Coming from you, this is high praise. o////o Thank you.
Posted by Aickavon12 11 years ago Report
I know this is an old old old story but I just recently found it and my god this thing is great X3
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Awwww, thank you. And it isn't _that_ old >_>;;
Posted by Aickavon12 11 years ago Report
Latest comment besides mine is 2 years ago X3 I think I joined the site one year ago, so it was up one year before I found the site... maybe by site defintion it's older?
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
*grumbles* Keep calling us old and we shall have to show you the meaning of slow digestion *tail lashes side-to-side*
Posted by Aickavon12 11 years ago Report
But maaaybe that's the plan? ;3 *purrs at the thought*
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
lol
Posted by Mid_Night 11 years ago Report
I must say this story is beautiful, I wonder if there more.
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
At the time I wrote this all I had was the single snapshot of "what if you found out your childhood pretend friend wasn't so pretend?" I have been RP'ing Inamara in recent months and have doodled some about her origins, but as of right now, no plans on continuing this story as there is no inspiration for what happens next.
And, thank you. Nice to get an ego stroke a while after posting the story ^^
Posted by Mid_Night 11 years ago Report
what I can I have a lack of reading abilities those days, I may join three years ago but sometimes I just end up getting research mode and find stories that I like even if it's been years since it been upload.
and you are most welcome.
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Yeah, I've found some old pieces and added a comment and/or fav years after that fact a few times myself. Made a few friends here and there doing that too *winks*
Posted by Mid_Night 11 years ago Report
seemed we are all in same boat.
Posted by SirScotty 11 years ago Report
It's a good thing I favorited this; every few months I find it again just browsing through and feel compelled to read it again.
Sincerely hope that you find the inspiration to write part two of this eventually. It's just too good to not hope for.
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
*chuckles* You just described how I annually reread the works of Throatwolf, the original inspiration for Inamara :))
Though the writing of more/a second part for this is complicated, adding more to this would require a rewrite of this first. I've learned so much more about writing, things I wanted for this story/scene, etc..
I just hope the rewriting it would not ruin it for you and others that enjoyed this.
Mostly Jessie's reactions to Inamara's "declaration" of she was hers now, going to eat her, etc., would need major redoing. Not that she would have to dragged kicking and screaming, beaten down, or anything like that, lol. But she sure as hell would go a whole lot less "happily" and need more convincing/coaxing until the fun parts came and she realized the potential fun parts of being a kitsune playtoy *chuckles*
Posted by SirScotty 11 years ago Report
If the rest of your writing is any indication (regardless of time period), then I'd not mind that one little bit.
That said, would it really need to be re-written that badly? Jessie, despite her own mild reservations in this version, is still obviously (to the reader) heavily influenced by Inamara's desires and wishes even at a young age. That conditioning wasn't for nothing after all!
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Yes, but that very point is what needs better clarification. But, you may have a point and further chapters May take care of that for me. Hmmmm, food for thought, indeed, food for thought.