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A lusty, reptile-themed woman and her giant lizard exact excessively lewd, voracious justice upon a bevy of deliciously lovely elven females.
Continuing my strange love for sexy elves as prey, this is the first part of an odd, gratuitous tale I've been picking at for some years. Never quite managed to let it go, though, and now we've got completion, so I might as well share, eh? Sexy elves, yuri, gratuitous vore, and more. I also ended up putting probably waaay more plot/world-building into this than anyone wants to see from a shameless vore tale: please skim ahead to the 'good bits' if you find yourself zoning out. xD
The second part - which is actually probably even more indulgently voracious, and focuses upon my other vore love: naughty giantesses - shall be uploaded inside of the next few days, probably.
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Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Incredible work, that was sexy and cathartic at the same time seeing the haughty bitches go down :)
Looking forward to what I can only assume is going to be Giant Goddesses making the Elves' afterlives a living (unliving?) nightmare.
Aww, poor Lewelin though, one of the lizard-girls did say that the Goddesses ate wicked souls, but I get the feeling that they probably won't be that discerning.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked this weird and excessive creation of mine! :D
Indeed, we shall be seeing a further exploration of naughty elves in uncomfortable situations. ;3
Poor Lewelin indeed! But who knows, maybe she'll be granted clemency for being cute and submissive?
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Looks like she'll have to hope for the best :)
Posted by Jarmelhrax 5 years ago Report
nice!
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Jarmelhrax 5 years ago Report
Now that I have read all the comments I fell like a fool for not starting my "nice!" with a captial.
Awesome work, keep it up!
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Hey, a comment is a comment, capitalization or not! I'm not one to judge. I'm just glad people seemed to like this one!
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
This was a rare one, karma strikes back, and what a way it did. I was a little confused at the prologue since the it wasn't your usual start with such an elaborate background story, but it neatly explained the second part when the real story started, great build up^^
I must say that I can easily understand why the lizards wanted to devour the arrogant elves, and their sexy nature was also just a great contribution. The lizards must become very full after such a victory, I wonder how many they can eat at once, Omodo must have been swollen after this meal!
Your sex scene was also well written and was gave the overall story an extra layer.
Well done :P
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Yeah, the intro was added fairly late in the 'life' of this work. As I was nearing completion, I realized: this story may be my more egregious example of 'telling instead of showing', with how it talked about the oppressive, tyrannical elves, but never really showed it. And even for such a shameless premise, I couldn't stand to leave it that way. Even if the prologue might have hurt the pacing somewhat, I think the trade-off was probably worth it.
Glad you enjoyed the excessive voreness though! And all the over-the-top yuri sensuality. I've been working on this one one-and-off for a few years now, so I'm glad the end result is appreciated.
The lizards vary in size a good bit based on age, with smaller adults being able to eat about 6-8 elf-sized prey, whilst the largest could probably devour close to 20. Omodo is on the larger size, and would be stuffed at about 14-16. Good thing there's such an ample supply of sexy elves to go around! (Yes, I've given this scenario way too much thought. xD)
Posted by averyhillpeak 5 years ago Report
Dang this was really good. Probably my favorite of your stuff so far.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! :D
And really? I honestly wasn't sure anyone but me would be into this bizarre indulgence in naughty elf abuse, but I'm very pleased to hear you liked it so well. It took me a million years to finish this thing. xD
Posted by Forstand 5 years ago Report
Wow, that was a great!
I always really like your descriptions of what its like for the prey to be packed into the pred's full belly along with all the other girls... So good.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Yeah, as I'm sure you can guess, I have a strong fixation on those type over-stuffed stomach sequences. I just can't resist the appeal! x3
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
This is fun! Vore as catharsis is enjoyable for the readers as well as for the characters. And Uana's feelings on the matter are clear as soon as we see her "shifting her hips enthusiastically". :D
Poor Lewelin... And Uana would have quite liked to keep her, too! I'm sure they'd have learnt to get on fine together, with Lewelin adapting nicely to her submissive role. But alas, down that tight reptilian throat she went, to squirm in the hot tight darkness with the others, silky bare elven skin and curves pressing and sliding smoothly all over her body! ;)
And she got her bottom smacked on the way down, too. Not the best of days for her, really, even if she DID enjoy parts of what came before.
Speaking of which, one of the rebel girls kissing Iinnora's mouth while she's being eaten was particularly... enjoyable. There's something sexy about a naughty, teasing, full-on kiss for someone who's about to be swallowed and digested all up.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I like a wide spectrum of 'sympatheticness' in prey, from the highly benevolent, such as your delightful Princess Wilenni, to the rather ill-behaved elves seen here. This may be one of my most indulgent creations yet, honestly. But the scenario just kept running through my head until I put it to (digital) paper! xD
Poor Lewelin indeed! She certainly showed an aptitude for submission, not to mention multi-tasking!
I too bear a great fondness for the 'pre-vore kiss' . . . something so very appealing and sensual about it. x3
Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report
This was a very fun read. The amount of delicious elf flesh gobbled up was quite enjoyable.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
I have something of a weakness for sexy elves. No idea why, but they just make the best prey for these type of scenario.
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 2 years ago Report
MMMMmm! I dont know how I ever missed this story, I read every one of the works you write. This was very very nice and I imagined myself as Uana loved it. Again, thanks for all you write and the wonderful way you make me feel!
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I had lots of fun putting this one together, so I'm very glad you enjoyed the sensual, elf-devouring romp! :3
I've wanted to write a follow-up for a long time too, so maybe I'll get around to that some time. :D
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Would have been a bit more interesting if the victim in the prologue had been a friend, or something, to the lizardfolk in the actual story.
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Actually, never mind my last comment - I misread/ misremembered.
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
No worries! I probably could have been clearer about who was who in the flashback, vs the present-day action that followed.
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Although having the Elves recognize the Lizards would have been interesting.
Maybe, if you do something similar, keep it to a handful?
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Well, I have wanted to do a followup to this story for some time, so I'll keep that in mind if that ever comes to light. :)
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Okay.