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In this direct continuation of Reptilian Retribution, we explore what happens to naughty elven women in the afterlife. Which involves tons of giantess naga vore, excessive amounts of sensual teasing, naga x naga yuri, and more. You should be able to understand/enjoy this fine without reading the 1st part, if you only want the giantess vore. x3
Anyway, it took me a little longer to upload the 2nd half of this than I expected, but here it is, for those who enjoy some giantess vore with merciless teasing and yuri.
I still don't know what compelled me to write this, and stick with it over 2+ years of occasional tweaking, but I just couldn't resist my muse on this one. Felaryan succubi are at least partly to blame though, especially for this 2nd half here. xP
I dunno how many of my readers will enjoy both halves of this tale, but either way, it's one of the silliest, most excessive things I've done. Enjoy!
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Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 5 years ago Report
Best afterlife 10/10
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Haha, I certainly can't argue with that! x3
Posted by Mechdragon1k 5 years ago Report
What a good pet, lizard is much better master than elf.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Agreed! I'm sure Lewelin will be very good indeed.
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
This was absolutely amazing, and definitively your ost erotic story by far! Those goddesses have a lot of good stuff (elves) looking forward too.
It was also quite a twist that Lewelin still is alie, but I am certainly not going to complain about that! And said elf seems more comfortable in her new role than what she is letting on ;P
But regarding Uana's witness to the goddesses punishment of the elves, did you know that one of the "rewards" by ascending to the heavens during the medieval time was to witness ones enemies being tortured in hell?
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Really? Huge thanks, I'm glad this ridiculous indulgence in erotic excess was appreciated so well. :D
It certainly does look like those Goddesses are gonna be indulging in many, many more feasts like that in the future! Good thing they enjoy devouring & digesting sexy elf-souls so well!
Lewelin is definitely warming to her new role. I think she may be a natural. x3
I didn't actually know that! That's an interesting bit of trivia, and certainly very relevant to the story I've put together here.
Posted by Forstand 5 years ago Report
Perfect sequel! loved it.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Nothing quite like a giantess-vore-filled followup to end on a good note. x3
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
You spoil us, you really do. :p No wonder Uana got quite excited! The goddesses' teasing words to their prey were lovely in their naughtiness, and I think we all enjoy seeing squirmy little elves trapped between the stuffed warm tummies of two love-making preds.
(At some point, I might draw inspiration from that for an IVC story, where Ida and Marlene, both heavily stuffed after a vore competition, meet up with several nervously eager 'prey' in private, and play with them in that way, pressing them between their tightly full tummies as they make love...)
Having the goddesses' tummies turn magically translucent was a new and fun idea! I don't think we'd *ever* been able to see preds watch their tightly packed food struggle around in there before. Kudos for a very appealing thought! A whole lot of elves crammed tightly into a very full tummy, and able only to rub their slick, healthy bare bodies against one another... I'm not surprised Ophidia and Euryale felt satisfied. ;)
Throughout the feast, I was waiting to see when one of the goddesses would pick Lewelin up, and how Uana might react. To find out at the end that Uana has been allowed to keep her as a 'pet' was a pleasant surprise! :D That certainly was considerate of Omodo. It seems Lewelin is adjusting reasonably well to her new life, and Uana is very much enjoying her. Fun to see Uana musing pleasantly about Lewelin's future (watching her squirm inside a reptile, or taking her somewhere safe and secluded where she can order her around and spank her to her heart's content) even while the elf is dutifully seeing to her needs!
I personally hope she gets to keep her as her submissive little servent, and grows even fonder of her while still keeping her 'on her toes'. But that's just the romantic in me. ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I aim to spoil! ;P
Glad you enjoyed the indulgent, erotic excesses of this, it has been quite fun to put it together (over a ridiculously long period of time). There's something highly appealing about the translucent-stomach thing, though to be fair, I believe I was first introduced to the inspiring premise in one of YOUR stories, 169, as I recall.
Ultimately, I couldn't resist letting Lewelin get off the 'hook'. Those two just make such a good pair, I'm sure they'll figure some way to keep Lewelin off the menu indefinitely. :3
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Oh yes, the 'x-ray view' in 169! And the filming of the hunt, consumption and bloated belly, so that viewers can watch it again and again. :)
Anyway, here's hoping Lewelin lives happily ever after, serving her mistress with devoted submissiveness, and staying away from any hot hungry bellies. Though I can understand Uana being a *bit* tempted to watch her get eaten up. ;)
Posted by Chitown1911 5 years ago Report
There is so much to love here!
I definitely have a thing for cruel preds, and this story did not disappoint. I REALLY enjoyed all the playful tormenting and teasing of their prey. So much fun!
Also, having a pred with a transparent digestive system is such a delightfully naughty idea. I though I was the only one who fantasized about such things. :-D
All in all, a very well-written and enjoyable story. Can't compliment enough!
Btw, would you ever consider going into more detail regarding the digestion of prey? Of course, without going into any hard digestion or gore (not a fan of either). I've always enjoyed your descriptions of internal scenes. Just interested in seeing the digestion progress a bit further. Let me know what you think ;-)
Sorry this comment was so long. Thank you so much for all your work!
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I myself fluctuate between 'innocent' and 'naughty' predator preferences myself, but there's no denying the appeal of a sexy predator sensually teasing her prey! x3
And I agree, the see-through digestive system adds a lot of potential for naughty shenanigans.
As far as digestion goes: I agree, not a fan of gore either, but the internal scenes are a favorite of mine. I'm not quite sure what you mean by 'going into more detail' though . . . just add a bit more to the sequences where the prey are all squished inside and squirming about? That's certainly a possibility, considering how much I enjoy doing those scenes already!
I love long comments! It means you were into the story enough you wanted to write a longer comment about it. That tells me I did an OK job on the story.
Posted by grz01 5 years ago Report
Great story, love the teasing!
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Sometimes I very much enjoy some good, merciless teasing of the prey, especially when they're of the more naughty sort. x3
Posted by Karbo 5 years ago Report
Wow what a story ! Probably the naughtiest I have seen from you yet as well :D Very nice descriptions, sensual and vivid and great teasing. Very nice job dude ;D
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
Yeah, this was indeed probably the naughtiest thing I've done. Was a lot of fun to put together! x3