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Angie retched. The tight skin of his stomach was sealed around the form of her friend. She could make out every groove of Jenn’s body. Her legs were curled up beneath her, soft ass bulging against Chris’ abdomen. He ran a hand over his gut, passing over Jenn’s terrified face and coming to rest on one of her boobs.
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Posted by rabidPsionic 5 years ago Report
This story was really interesting. I don't even like safe vore all that much and this one is great.
However, there does seem to be an error.
"He rested his chin on one of their chests, probably Jenn’s by the feel of it, and settled down for a nap. The heavy" and then it cuts off. There was most likely supposed to be something there, or maybe you forgot to delete something you didn't want entirely.
Posted by Brazzel 5 years ago Report
Snap Crackle and Pop! Thank you for bringing my attention to that. I think it was just an artifact from moving the document to Word, but I've fixed it and hopefully it will show up correctly. I am glad that you liked the story.
Posted by rugli 5 years ago Report
Wonderful story,
But I cannot help but feel that they all deep down wanted to end up inside him, since they didn't seem to put up much fight at all.
But I love the most at the end how Rebecca seems to have been inside him several times before, but not her friends considering how they reacted. As I love how Rebecca does clams them down. I wouldn't mind to see this continue at some point from where this one leaves off.
Considering this last part about Rebecca's this story a follow up to another story? Since she has been there before with him.
Posted by Brazzel 5 years ago Report
This was all I was commissioned for, but these characters are very fun and I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation myself.
Posted by rugli 5 years ago Report
I see I did love to commission ether sequel or prequel to this from you but the person that did commission this should probably have to say what happens next since this was his idea and his characters considering he has been here around for a long time.
Posted by rugli 5 years ago Report
If he is planning further commissions based on this then he should have the first option to do so obviously.
Posted by Brazzel 5 years ago Report
Indeed! But if you have any ideas that you ever need put on paper, feel free to PM me.
Posted by HairyBelly 5 years ago Report
Nice story, safe-vore is so rare...
Posted by Brazzel 5 years ago Report
Sometimes you just need some tummy lovin’.