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The complete story of how Yusuke Mizuhara entered the lives of Mitsuki and Reina Toyohara and how all of them became lovers, presented in one continuous narrative.
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Posted by Robotdocter 3 years ago Report
67 pages oh geez :O
Posted by Elpie 3 years ago Report
yeah, i hadn't quite realized how long the whole thing was, either. the version here actually has slightly fewer pages because i adjusted the margins so that the final page wouldn't have lots of empty space.
Posted by unfamiliarnostalgia1235 3 years ago Report
It seems that you made Reina and Mitsuki taller and bustier in your fanfics than in the visual novel or anime. You even made Mitsuki older.
Posted by Elpie 3 years ago Report
a bit ;) that's been a thing for a while. iirc it partly had to do with deciding to give them (or Mitsuki, at least) actual measurements for their adjusted cup sizes in one of the rewrites and that's actually partly dependent on height. (i THINK i have Reina's full measurements written down somewhere, but haven't committed them to the actual text like i did Mitsuki's)
increasing Reina's bust size from F-cup to GG-cup and Mitsuki from H to JJ was entirely done on a whim when i first rewrote this part of the story from the original hentai, though.
i'm also not embarrassed to admit that i didn't actually know Mitsuki had a canon age in the source material when i decided that she was 40 here (for everyone else reading this comment, she's apparently supposed to have had Reina at 16 and is 34 in the original hentai).
of course, Reina's father was still alive in the hentai, too, and at least one translation of its summary said that she and Mitsuki were ROOMMATES instead of family :P Yusuke is also a much nicer person here ;)
Posted by unfamiliarnostalgia1235 3 years ago Report
And just so everyone else here knows, Reina and Mitsuki are canonically 157 cm (precisely 156.8 cm) and 165 cm (precisely 164.5 cm) tall, respectively. That's about 5ft 2in and 5ft 5in each.
This was, however, changed to have Reina be 169 cm (~5ft 7in) and Mitsuki be 172 cm (~5ft 8in) tall here. (LowProfile can correct me if I'm wrong for this part)
Posted by Elpie 3 years ago Report
one-hundred-and-seventy-ONE centimeters for Mitsuki ;) i admit that a fair bit of it was probably originally changed because i only half-remembered some details of the animated version when i wrote all this stuff at first and it's been slightly changed or expanded upon over time such that this is really it's own thing even ignoring the more fetishy stuff i wrote in for the chapters set after this.
but yeah, both Mitsuki and Reina are noticeably shorter than Yusuke in the original hentai, at least in the animated version that i directly based it on.