Posted by SlimJimQuickBorn 1 year ago Report

This story is one of my all-time favs from the old Eunuch Archive! I really like the things you added, f.e. the little boy crying for his mommy. I missed things like that in the (great) original, too!

And damn, describing the cowgirls as femcans feasting on the boys' freshly harvested and roasted nuts makes the plot so much hotter!

Also, I like that you described the tall woman capturing poor Jimmy a little more. She's my fav character! I too imagined her as a hot blonde amazon. Thanks for that!
I would have even loved to read a more detailed description of her hunting the fleeing and panic-stricken "hero" through the bushes.

The only thing I dislike in your version is the boys having an orgasm during their processings which I find very unrealistic (though I know the whole story is anyhow totally unrealistic lol).

It's such a pity there are few stories like this to find on the net - stories of horsewomen or female warriors hunting down naked and scared young teen boys. The only one that comes close to it is "Huntress" by htabdoolb.

Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the feedback. Happy to make a very good story better.

In regards to the boys orgasming, yeah, I concur with you there, for the most part, but I imagine a few getting so worked up, knowing what was coming, that by the time the women grabbed hold of their packages, it was enough to send them over the edge. After all, these are young boys, not grown men.

Posted by SlimJimQuickBorn 1 year ago Report

would be amazing if you'd write a sequel ;-)

Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report

Haha, I might some day. Did you notice I made some subtle changes at the end?

Posted by SlimJimQuickBorn 1 year ago Report

Yes, as I said I love your altered Femcan-ending. A second "Round-Up"-Part would be great. Maybe this time even crueler, with one of the captured boys being ceremonially roasted alive while the other terrified and crying kids are forced to watch and being threatened like "Eeach of you little calves will end up like this, one by one. We gonna feed on you for months!"

Posted by slaveboymeat 1 year ago Report

Oh my! ???? This was amazing— I saw identified with that boy Jimmy! I thought maybe he’d hold out—he seemed so clever and quick but those “cougars” showed they were justified being apex predators. To have my most cherished parts simply cut off like that, peeled and tossed into a bucket with those of all the other boys. No one would ever be able to sort them all out again after that. But the woman just cooked and ate them anyway so even that fleeting chance was hopeless.
Truly a horrifying and arousing tale.

Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report

Glad to hear that. Of course, most of the credit goes to the original author, but I hope my updates improved the story to make it even better.

Posted by SlimJimQuickBorn 1 year ago Report

I totally agree. This story is arousing me for so many years now. It made me even search for pictures of matching tough cowgirls on horses. The fiercer they look, the more excited I get ;-)
I so much want to read a sequel of this tale or at least a similiar kind of story, but unfortunately I never found one.