Posted by IddlerItaler 9 months ago Report

I was having trouble sleeping and saw your story pop up twice in my notifications (once for the lamia prey tag, once for watching you) so I dedided to dive in.

A cute and sweet finale to the trilogy. It's a nice contrast to the previous chapters as those involved unwilling prey, and the bit where big-bellied Stacey got to reach the remote and watch TV during bouts of wakefulness was particularly adorbs. I'm happy we got a lamia character being shown as a person more than a monster despite your original idea. Though I guess she's more like a meal now. And a monstruous heap afterwards.

...Another mature woman named Eva?

One of the classic trope involving lamia preys was avoided. Stacey wasn't able to quickly reel her in like a noodle but it actually took effort, and the tail wasn't particularly tasty. I also don't see undigested scales that often. I don't really mind as it adds originality.

"They just wussed out. Didn’t open the door, missed out on the meal of a lifetime, and funny enough, ended up getting eaten themselves a few days later."

This describes the average experience of someone trying to get a pred RP partner :P

Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report

I was wondering what kind of prey to do for this one, since I wanted someone bigger and higher-ranked, and a friend suggested a willing lamia, which checked all the necessary boxes pretty nicely. I'm glad you enjoyed the digestion sequence; since I'd already written Stacey taking catnaps while digesting a normal-sized person, her being a snoozy pred when she got a big belly just made sense and was cute to imagine ^^

I did debate throwing in a line somewhere of Eva mentioning how ashamed her mother would be of her for doing this, to make it sound like she was something of an outlier as a preyish lamia, but the best spot for that was taken up by her telling Stace about her recommendation at work, so... it kinda never made it in.

-n- I can't even use the excuse that I record my pred names not my prey names, the last Eva was a pred...

I mean, people do call lamias noodles... but their tails are usually as thick as their torsos if not thicker, so it made sense to me that the tail would be even harder to work down than a person... I imagine some people just want to skim over the swallowing part. Gotta wonder why people don't do scales as indigestibles though... I know I kinda liked the idea of a big pile of former lamia absolutely full of lamia scales, especially if the sun was shining off them after their nice acid polish...

Didn't know finding a pred was that hard, given I RP as one... which I guess I was kinda keeping secret but given that I've been debating posting a few RP logs I guess that's gonna be public knowledge sooner or later

Posted by IddlerItaler 9 months ago Report

Yea, that reasoning makes sense. I remember lamias, but I'm not sure if you have introduced other larger species yet. I would've also suggested centaurs, arachnes, scyllas (octopus), maybe minotaurs/cowgirls...

Oh, the swallowing part is the best part in vore, for me. Well, alongside getting a good look at the mouth. I'm not certain on how appealing pooping out all tail scales undigested would be, but a few mixed in with the remains would totally be scenic.

I have a couple of fixed pred partners nowadays. I opened up my gallery because I wanted post commissions and scenes I had thought up with them, so I guess that would make me... RPerWriter? Most of them are cleaned up enough to not pass off as RP logs at first glance, but if the characters suddenly react to a gesture from two paragraphs ago or you find a mysterious "you" or "I" where it shouldn't be, you now know why.

Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report

If not for that suggestion I'd have probably defaulted to something boringly plain like a wolf or some other larger-than-cat predator... it was fun to go a lot further up the scale / food chain instead~

I probably lean more towards digestion than swallowing, though I do enjoy writing the swallowing a fair bit. Not sure where my enjoyment of my varyingly-detailed disposal scenes falls on the scale there... but on the scales note, seeing as I'd established Stacey as a pred that likes dumping the indigestible parts of her meals, the scales just seemed like a fitting peak to that progression as well :)

Well, now I'll have to pay more attention and see what I can see in your stories... though I've been finding a lot of writers recently so who knows what gallery I'll end up trapped in next ^^'

Posted by Blackfire24die 9 months ago Report

Another one from the blue haired cat girl. Delightful.

Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report

Glad you like her, she was a lot of fun to write ^^

Posted by Wowbolitz 9 months ago Report

Please continue writing in this setting. Especially this main character is most amazing.

Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report

Cleaned up the accidental repeats, no worries ^^

Glad you enjoyed Stacey and her little stories! I probably will end up revisiting the setting, 'cause it was a lot of fun, but I do have some WIPs to finish before I start more of them...

Posted by Randomdude5 9 months ago Report

Stacey is on her way to being a literal fat cat.
If she keeps up her eating habits, she may become obese. I am somewhat interested in future stories of her eating people.

Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report

More Stacey stories: likely~

Her getting fat... less likely. I do like weight gain a bit, but I'm not that big on overweight characters... odds are that a lot of her snake fat will have been lost by the next time we see her. Even with her new position in HR, it's not like she's going to be doing mass layoffs all the time... she'll have time to lose some weight.

Posted by Randomdude5 9 months ago Report

I am not that big on weight gain. I only mentioned it, because the stories were posted so close to each other, and that made it feel like Stacey was also rapidly eating prey. It makes sense that she should work off some of the weight.

Posted by Perodian 9 months ago Report

Dinner, date, promotion, and digestion. She got what she wanted and so much more. With that new job at human resources, she'll get so much fatter. That job sounds like it's less human resources in the sense of acting as resources to help the humans but rather as a group that treats the humans as resources to be consumed.

Posted by PaperWriter 8 months ago Report

For an evening that she started off worried about, everything really went her way~

Huh, never realized that HR was supposed to be resources to help humans, always thought it was the department that manages the company's human "resources" as needed... I guess that makes more sense. But yeah when you can just eat the problematic employees there's a bit less incentive to actually solve their problems.

My preference against fat characters aside... I don't know that she'll get that much fatter? Mass layoffs don't happen often; and with Stacey being the department's new girl and a somewhat low-ranked employee, her odds of being in charge or even just part of something that big are pretty low. She might get a small project team or something like that though...

Posted by Perodian 8 months ago Report

I don't really have a preference for fat characters either, what I meant to say is she may gain weight, as in grow due to the weight of her meals. Some of that weight gain happens here.

Posted by PaperWriter 8 months ago Report

My bad! I can never tell if people are into things or are just commenting on them, but I don't want to build expectations that I'll probably let down... so yeah, even though a lot of Eva's gifts will probably burn off, little by little her (former) coworkers are gonna turn her into a nice sexy catgirl~

Posted by Ev0nix 8 months ago Report

V good but not detailed enough

Posted by PaperWriter 8 months ago Report

Glad you liked it!

The amount of detail is definitely lower compared to some of my other stories, but given that I finished the first two parts in a day apiece I wanted to do the same with this one... probably would've been a longer and nicer story without putting that limit on myself, but I'm pretty happy how well it came out despite that

Posted by CeleryPrey 8 months ago Report

You had me at 'willing lamia prey who was formerly a pred getting turned into a poop snake by a smaller pred' (seriously, that's some of my favorite buttons pushed right there).

This was a short and sweet little story that nonetheless packed a lot into it (play on words absolutely intended)!

Posted by PaperWriter 8 months ago Report

Thank you! Smaller pred is peak, even better when the prey was a pred themselves; I'm glad someone suggested a lamia as prey or I probably would've ended up doing someone smaller and much less fun for all... it was a real good time filling a cat so full~

Posted by EloquentOrc 8 months ago Report

Great to see some lamia prey appreciation. :)

Posted by PaperWriter 8 months ago Report

Thanks! ^^
Turns out that it's pretty popular stuff!